While
we are only a few weeks into AP Literature, I have learned a few valuable
aspects about the course that will certainly help in the future. Our first big
annotation assignment was on The Nuts and
Bolts of College Writing by Michael Harvey. We had ample time to complete
it, and although I was well aware that it was fairly long for reading in a
single sitting, I still ended up starting the day before it was due. While I
regret this decision because of the unnecessary stress it brought me, it did
not affect the appreciation I had for the content of the piece. I especially
enjoyed Harvey’s breakdown of the “pompous style” and how using too many nouns
and linking verbs can prove fatal in academic writing. It made me reconsider my
own style of writing and whether I hide behind the same clumsy phrases that
clouded his examples. In many cases, I find that there is usually a much
clearer way of stating something using simpler language, which can then more
effectively develop truly complicated ideas.
The
academic skills emphasized in The Nuts and Bolts
of College Writing contrast sharply with the other focus of the class so
far, which is the “theater of the absurd.” We were first introduced to this
through a general article describing the history of the practice, and have
begun to analyze its use in Albee’s The
American Dream. The dialogue is almost disorienting in its lack of meaning
and direction. Conversations in the play never mean what is spoken, never
amount to anything, and always fall into incongruity and non-sequiturs. The
irony in this style is that deeper existential meanings hide behind the utter
lack of consequence in the script. The absurdity discussed in the article seems
to exist in order to hide a rather sophisticated commentary. This is the kind
of play that only an already understanding audience could appreciate, because
the true entertainment lies beneath the surface of the scene, setting, and even
the characters. Sometimes as we read it in class, it can be hard to not laugh
at the ridiculous contradictions that arise. It is actually fairly interesting
how we would transition from reading something like Harvey’s book, which
focuses on making the purpose of the writing more explicit, to Albee’s play,
which goes completely in the opposite direction.
The
other article that we annotated, Susan Glaspell’s “A Jury of her Peers” had
very different messages from both of the other pieces. To me, this story used
plain but direct language to illustrate the lack of equality between the sexes
in an early 20th century rural setting. The men in the story only
consider the women useful for comforting one another and worrying about trivial
domestic tasks, when in fact they use their mutual understanding of the
situation of another woman to deduce her involvement in a gruesome murder. I
found it intriguing how they hide the evidence, as if to say that the events
that led her to commit the crime, mainly linked to an abusing husband, were
enough to justify her actions through the eyes of her “peers.” As with The American Dream, I look forward to
the class discussions where we will be able to share insights into these works
with one another, deepen our understanding, and form a variety of
interpretations.
Hi Thomas,
ReplyDeleteI must say that overall your blog posts were very well written, very sumptuously detailed and quite relevant. And you had plenty of evidence when it came time for you to back up one of your claims. Although I must also say that something that should be critiqued in your writing is that you are slightly too wordy. When I say that I mean you sometimes use words that clutter up your writing and it takes away from the concision of it. For example you say: "...which can effectively develop truly complicated ideas". There was nothing really wrong with using the word "truly". It just could have been a little more concise had you not used it. But overall I loved your diction and overall writing style.
Thomas, nice work assembling the tedious list of assignments that we have conquered over the past few weeks of school. I liked how you structured your essay so that each of these topics were discussed in a paragraph of their own. Some things you could add in your first paragraph when discussing "The Nuts and Bolts of College Writing" are some specific techniques that you acquired from the book such as how you can write more clearly or use simpler language. The addition of specific details will help you retain the information easier and help you transfer it to your long-term memory. You did analyze pretty thoroughly in your other paragraphs though, even though we were not given a required length for the assignment, so good job overall.
ReplyDeleteI would make a joke saying I hope you learned to not to procrastinate on annotations but I did the same thing. I’m glad you’re thinking about the pompous style of writing. I wouldn’t call your writing pompous exactly, but there do seem to be a lot of unnecessary words. They make you sound very eloquent but I challenge you to be short and sweet in your next blog post.
ReplyDeleteYou analyzed A Jury of her Peers very well, however I would have added a section to review the DIDLS. Dissecting the reading with those elements was the point of the assignment so a light review would have been good.